Let's make a story

  • This has been done in the past and I really liked it so I'm going to start us off with a new one.

    So basically all we have to do is make a story between all of us which continues when people type in this topic.

    Rules:

    • There is a min of 5 words and a max of 10 words per reply.
    • You can't say "The End" or anything inappropriate.
    • You can't reply twice consecutively.
    • You can't say the same thing over and over again.

    On Snake Island there was a pirate named John the ...

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  • Flatulent. He spent his days drinking, and ...

  • watching the waters, waiting for a sign of.....

  • Of the kracken from the briny deep...

  • The water stirred, what was the sight that beheld his gaze.......

  • Only a rebellious mermaid, renowned for stealing...

  • Barrels of grog from the local...

  • store, which John saw because of the black...

    Edit: Too late, still works without that much editing :D

  • Slimy trail left behind by the mermaid...

  • Angry, John cursed his luck. That was the last ....

  • barrel of grog the store had. He needed it, so...

  • he pulled out his trusty spyglass.

  • And jumped on his boat to find...

  • A crewmate passed out on the deck ...

  • In a puddle of vomit and half eaten bananas....

  • John then made his way to the crowsnest but was...

  • Interrupted by a pig on board...

  • @dark-shadow9056 Which pointed (!) at a red circle.

  • On the map downstairs, possibly leading to the mermaids hideout...

  • Or the local tavern, but then...

  • A terrible storm began brewing around the ship.

  • John the Flatulent had let some nasty wind out his lower hatch

  • @zombie-p1ague Which blew away the map (with the red circle).

  • @jcmdeadpool It danced in the fetid breeze til it landed on....

  • The crew mate, passed out on the deck.

  • Waking him up. His name was Finnegan the...

  • Chinnigan, finest beard on the seven seas, who...

  • Wanted to know where his map with the red circle was.

  • @jcmdeadpool This reply goes beyond 10 words so everyone please ignore it and you back to the one before it

  • This is what we have so far

    "On Snake Island there was a pirate named John the ...Flatulent. He spent his days drinking and ...watching the waters, waiting for a sign of... the kracken from the briny deep...
    The water stirred, what was the sight that beheld his gaze.......Only a rebellious mermaid, renowned for stealing...barrels of grog from the local...store, which John saw because of the black...slimy trail left behind by the mermaid...Angry John cursed his luck. That was the last ....barrel of grog the store had. He needed it, so...he pulled out his trusty spyglass.And jumped on his boat to find...A crewmate passed out on the deck ...In a puddle of vomit and half eaten bananas....John then made his way to the crowsnest but was...Interrupted by a pig on board...Which pointed at a red circle... on the map downstairs, possibly leading to the mermaids hideout...or the local tavern, but then...A terrible storm began brewing around the ship... John the Flatulent had let some nasty wind out his lower hatch Which blew away the map. It danced on the fetid breeze until it landed on... The crew mate, passed out on the deck.Waking him up. His name was Finnegan the...Chinnigan, finest beard on the seven seas, who..."

  • realised he needed more grog and

  • fell asleep again. John resumed his mission, first he must ...

  • follow the black trail, thus he raise the anchor as

  • a great big tentacle rose from the ocean's murky depths

  • Followed by three more, alas it was...

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